Dang, normally im not one to complain about editing but this is just too big an eyesore to go unnoticed. Somehow the name of one of the guys changed from Vincent, to Austin and then back to Vincent again - Vincent being the correct name. And Freya became Carna and then Freya again.I dont care if theres misspellings or improper grammar but come on... 2 wrong names.. Besides the wrong names (Ughh) it was just as good as the 1st book, however i will not give it a full 5 star, because of before stated problems. Thats just too big a problem for me.